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Lay All Words

Posted by MFish Profile 07/07/22 at 09:37AM Share Other See more by MFish

Lay all the words
down, on a line.
In order doesn't matter,
unless you want to rhyme.
Writing a narrative,
in poetic prose,
puts forth the words,
as if, growing a rose.
Using "poetic license"
is a good way to write,
as you can suppress rules,
from some wrong to right.

A Comment by Loy

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Loy • 07/07/2022 at 11:16PM • Like Profile

Great poetic license! Well done…

A Comment by MFish

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MFish • 07/08/2022 at 01:13AM • Like Profile

Thank You.

The Simon and Garfunkel lyrics,
"Slip, Sliding Away" is how
I describe my wife's journey
from Early Onset Dementia,
into the perils of Alzheimer's.
A person of intelligence, who
cannot/does not know the name
of any item. As a result,
she does not respond to any
issue or direction. A small child
who doesn't remember from
day to day or minute to minute.
Her inability to cope with daily
routines is difficult as she
does not remember where she
is, where rooms are or the
fixtures which are essential
for her daily needs.
She no longer acknowledges
she has this diagnosis. She did
understand in the beginning,'
January 2017 diagnosis, of Dementia.

Red, rode the waves.
It was ridden hard.
Keep your deeds close,
remove the hidden card.
Peel off the caves,
remember the word.
"Don't believe others"
not even those read,
stay loose with life,
no matter your choice.
Do the right thing,
then you can rejoice.
Fret not about others,
or the words which
they write or the lies
which you will hear
every day and all night.
Be your own master
in the field which you love
and avoid others who
attack from above.
My brain is addled,
I no longer know
what to do, except
think of others.
Others like you.