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Look in the past for the beautiful
image, I see next to me.
No one can tell us we can't love
each other, until the time we're free.
Please help me now,
for I feel like a stranger;
A strange thought for me.
Walk this way with me forever
and I will make you see,
my heart is breaking now,
as I no longer can be,
the mirror in the window,
of you looking back at me.

The coming darkness
of a long cold night,
comes gradually, once more
as day enters twilight.
When the light of day
dwindles down
and fades away
to a moonlit sky,
with stars a flicker.
We pass the time
but it goes not quicker.
When the dawn breaks
like a clap of thunder,
our night of fun will
still be a wonder.

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Carl • 10/02/2020 at 11:39PM • Like 1 Profile

Very nice, it makes one think of the flow and rhythm of life.

A Comment by Loy

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Loy • 10/02/2020 at 11:44PM • Like 1 Profile

Beautiful poem

A Comment by MFish

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MFish • 10/03/2020 at 11:35PM • Like Profile

Thank you both for the nice words.

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An exercise, done on command:
Draw a picture of your hand.
This was done 40 years ago.
Why I didn't continue? I don't know.
So now, I must, with old brain
Start again, working to re-train,
My eyes to capture, what I see,
On to paper again, so readily.

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Loy • 09/30/2020 at 12:04AM • Like 1 Profile

Can’t wait to see it!

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MFish • 09/30/2020 at 11:00PM • Like Profile

found it but having difficulty loading it. Patience Jerry

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Loy • 10/01/2020 at 11:40PM • Like 1 Profile

Nice! Hands are very difficult. Well done.

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Lines

Posted by MFish Profile 09/29/20 at 08:53PM Share Other See more by MFish

Have I seen you around?
Have you been here before?
May I walk you home?
Could we just explore,
Talking of the times
And things we adore.
Would you have dinner with me
So we can talk and see
If we are compatible and
Have the same love,
Or is our meeting
Just a passing love?
It must be difficult,
During a time like this
For there will be no hugging
And most certainly, No Kiss.